Revision as of 23:07, 17 February 2023 (view source) Embri (talk \| contribs) (Feedback on the A to Bee guide.)		Revision as of 23:10, 17 February 2023 (view source) Embri (talk \| contribs) m (formatting.) Newer edit →
Line 39: 2.2.2 ''don't use ignoble bees you can ignore the first part.'' -> Ignore the potential for no Princess, not ignore that there'll only ever be one. Needs to mention the number of drones is the Fertility trait. and Fertility doesn't mean diddlysquat when it comes to Princess production numbers. Line 88: Some of this data would be more concise as a table. ''3x as many species (not fun at all)'' -> why would you call breeding bees unfun in a guide that's supposed to be about promoting the selfsame activity? Also, opinion. Change to fact, such as "takes much longer" or "bigger investment/more effort". ''and magic apiaries have 0.9x when I boosted and 1.8x when boosted'' -> Random "I?" not understanding. Also explain what boosted means/how to boost. Line 99: says it will explain mutations in its own section, but I cannot see such a section? other than the math section, is that meant? Link to it! (Currently up to this section, will continue later.) [[User:Embri\|Embri]] ([[User talk:Embri\|talk]]) 23:06, 17 February 2023 (UTC)

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